Dhoop K Saath Gaya Saath Nibhaane Waala,

ujalaa

TM Star
Dhoop k saath gaya saath nibhaane waala,
Ab kahan aaye ga wo lout k aane waala,
Rait par chhorr gaya naqsh hazaaron apne,​
Kisi paagal ki tarah naqsh mitaane waala,​
Sabz shaakhen kabhi aise to nahi cheekhti hain,​
Kon aaya hai parindon ko daraane waala,​
Aariz_e_shaam ki surkhi ne kiaa faash use,​
Bardaa_e_abr main thaa aag lagaane waala,​
Safar_e_shab ka taqaaza hai mere saath raho,​
Dasht pur_haul hai toofaan hai aane waala,​
Mujh ko dar-parda sunaata raha qissa apna,​
Agle waqton ki hikayat sunaane waala,​
Shabanami ghaas, ghane phool, larazati kirneain,​
Kon aayaa hai khizaanon ko lutaane waala,​
Ab to aaraam karen sochti aankhen meri​
Raat ka aakhri taaraa bhi hai jaane waala...!!!​
 
Adaab Ujaala Sahiba,

Matla behad umda hai aur deegar ashar bhi...mujh ko hasil e ghazal ye sher laga

Safar_e_shab ka taqaaza hai mere saath raho,
Dasht pur_haul hai toofaan hai aane waala,


Khuda hafiz,
Ahmad Cameron
 

ujalaa

TM Star
Adaab Ujaala Sahiba,

Matla behad umda hai aur deegar ashar bhi...mujh ko hasil e ghazal ye sher laga

Safar_e_shab ka taqaaza hai mere saath raho,
Dasht pur_haul hai toofaan hai aane waala,


Khuda hafiz,
Ahmad Cameron
bht shukriya janab aap b poetry shar kijye or khush rehiye
 
Aap ke pahley misrey ke khayal ko ek aur andaz mein main ne likha hai apni pahli ghazal jo post kari hai yahan....waqt miley to zaroor parhiye ga...meri ghazal ka pahla misra hai

"Baat pahunchey gi yahan tak......."

Khuda hafiz,
Ahmad Cameron
 

ujalaa

TM Star
Aap ke pahley misrey ke khayal ko ek aur andaz mein main ne likha hai apni pahli ghazal jo post kari hai yahan....waqt miley to zaroor parhiye ga...meri ghazal ka pahla misra hai

"Baat pahunchey gi yahan tak......."

Khuda hafiz,
Ahmad Cameron
wahhh sure acha lagy ga {(thx)}pharti hoon abhi ja k.....{(girlangel)}
 
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