yeh barishein..!!!

[Qawareer]

g zarur..ap dobara parhen..agr kuch smjh na aaye to ap mujh se poch sakti hn

bohat umda,,,,,,,,,,,hum is ko dobara parhen ge kiyum k kuch baten samajh nahi ayin

 

[!! h a y a !!]

bhut nice sharing hai .... kuch batain kuch yadain beetay huwe wo pal insaan ke saath hote hain aur to kuch bhi nahi...

 

[New Wolf]

great anaaaya...=D>=D>=D>

 

[New Wolf]

Wah Anaaya ji kya baat hai lijiye hum bi kuch lines add karte hai umeed hai pasand aaye aapko​

very nice lavi g.....

Hamare Baad Chali Rasm-e-Dosti Ki Nahi​

Hawa Ki Zad Mein Koi Shama Phir Jali ke Nahi
Bichar ke Jab Bhi Mile Mujhse , Pochta HaiWoh Shaks
Ke Inn Dino Koi Taza Ghazal Hui Ke Nahi​

Suna Hai Aam Thi Kal Shab Ko Chaand Ki Bakhshish
Bhuje Gharoon Mein Bi Uthri Hay Chandni ke Nahi
Nikal Ke Jisse Hua Apna Dard Awara
Kisi Ke Dil Mein Woh Mehfil Bi Phir Saji K Nahi​

Woh Reh-guzar Jo Andheron Mein Saans Leti Thi
Tumhare Naqsh-e-Qadam Se Chamak Utti Ke Nahi​

Diyaar-e-Hijar Se Aaye Ho Kuch Kaho
Ki Shaam-e-Ghum Bi Kisi Morr Par Mili Ke Nahi​

 

[MSC]

hmmm Very beautiful wording Annaya...
really lovely linez....

 

[MSC]

waah Annu wah....bahut khhob...
Abb ye barish ka dusra rukh bhi mulaheza ho...

Ye barishen,ye khunk hawa ye pal pal badalta mausam,kayenaat k haseen rang jab dil me jazb hote hain to sari duniya itni dilkash itni dilfareb lagti hai,dil yunhi dharkne lagta hai,honton se apne ap meethe sur nikalne lagte hain..lagta hai sari duniya mohabaton ki barish me naha gayi hai..andaz bahkne lagte hain..Aisa mahsus hota hai k weerano me bhi bahaar ka basera hai,phoolon ki khilkhilahat hai,har cheez nayi nayi,dhuli dhuli,ujli saaf o shafaaf suraj ki kirne aur barish k sangam me sari duniya khaus e qaza ka sama pesh karti hai,,dil me bhi dhanak rang utarte hain....

wah kia baat hai...
aisa lagta hai abhi aise hi koi nazara hai samne
yeh sab parh kar
realling feeling great!
God bless ya!

 

[~Bahaar~]

wah........
mashallah ..
bhot khoob..
bahar ne b qalm toor diya aj..

ma abi isi k jawab me or likhti hon

Shukriya janab...
bas baithe baithe yunhi lafzon ki kahkashan banti gayi aur warqon ko siyan karti gayi..
ji haan apke khayalath ka intezar rahega..

 

[Zee Leo]

nice janab buhat acha likha hai annu

 

[Zee Leo]

bukhar bethe bethe kamar main dard nahi huwa nice sharing from u also

 

[~Bahaar~]

aala..
thnx bahar g..
ye muje boht pasnd hai siso

Shukriya meri humdum ,meri dost..

chalo aaj barishon ko dekhkar ye ahed e wafa karlen
tum humdum raho meri aur hum apki ulfat me apne ko mubtela karlen
​

 

[~Bahaar~]

bukhar bethe bethe kamar main dard nahi huwa nice sharing from u also

Jab dil ko koi justajoo hoti hai to khayalth kabhi kisi taraf nahi bhatakte....
ye hausla ye azm har kisi ki jageer nahi hota
karte hain dilse hum kalamband apni har tahreer
k rooh bhi parwaz kar jaye to pata nahi chalta

 

[Asma24]

bht khoob,great poetry...v.good sharing

 

[~Bahaar~]

wah kia baat hai...
aisa lagta hai abhi aise hi koi nazara hai samne
yeh sab parh kar
realling feeling great!
God bless ya!

zarra nawazi hai..
aql tasleem nahi karti k koi meri bhi adna si tahreer ki itni pazeerayi karega..
Halaath to wo hain k dil ki gehrayi se barishon k mausam ko pani tahreer se pani pani kardun
magar abhi door hai mausam barsaat ka
dilkash hawaon ka bahte badal ka urti ghataon ka
zindagi ne ki wafa to zabt e tahreer me ye bhi hoga
sari kayenaat ki khubsurti o khushnumayi chand jumlon me ada hogi

 

[Zee Leo]

nice bahaar acha jawab hai .. magar rooh parwaz kyon kar jati hai

 

[~Bahaar~]

nice bahaar acha jawab hai .. magar rooh parwaz kyon kar jati hai

Rooh ko parwaz ki taqat bhi to hai
humko phir whi zabt ki adat bhi to hai
kya kahe apne teekhay mizaaj ko ~Bahaar~
iski yhi ada sabke hansne ki surat bhi to hai

 

[Zee Leo]

lolzz samajh nahi aya .. neeend aarahi hai ub mujhe ye sub parh parh ke bye aik meethi si ninni le kar hazir hota hon FI AMMAN ALLAH

 

[MSC]

zarra nawazi hai..
aql tasleem nahi karti k koi meri bhi adna si tahreer ki itni pazeerayi karega..
Halaath to wo hain k dil ki gehrayi se barishon k mausam ko pani tahreer se pani pani kardun
magar abhi door hai mausam barsaat ka
dilkash hawaon ka bahte badal ka urti ghataon ka
zindagi ne ki wafa to zabt e tahreer me ye bhi hoga
sari kayenaat ki khubsurti o khushnumayi chand jumlon me ada hogi

wah wah kia baat hai
chale phr Barsaat aur apke tahreer ka intezar rahega...
Gud luck!
Thanks

 

[annie qadri]

zabarbast ....

 

[mirza37]

bohat khoob Annaya, lavina & Bahaar

keep it up ​

 

[~Bahaar~]

shukriya dosto....
pasand aur agahi ki manzil p ana bahut hi mushkiltareen hai..
ap sabki himmat afzayi k liye tah e dil se mashkoor hain
TM k kalamkaar
Anaaya Ali
&
Bahaar