ZiNDAGi EK PAHELi - by ADi

[~Bahaar~]

ao sikhaon tume unday ka funda
ye nai pyare koi mamoli banda
is me chupa hai jeevan ka falsafa

Nahi naaaa...
amaaaa yaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrShayeri me wazan nahi hai
Radeef aur qafiye ka ilm hai apko?

 

[Atif-adi]

Nai Faseeh o baleegh Urdu me humkalam hote hain hum magar afsos sadafsos k yahan zyadatar awaam urdu se be behra hai..Majburi me hume aaam zaban ka istemal karna parta hai takay apke bhejy e shahai me kuch to sama sake

ab is ki tashree bhi bata do

 

[Atif-adi]

Nahi naaaa...
amaaaa yaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrShayeri me wazan nahi hai
Radeef aur qafiye ka ilm hai apko?

to do char kilo ka wazan utha ker perho

 

[~Bahaar~]

ab is ki tashree bhi bata do

Ye nawaqif logon seisiliye mei guftagu karna nahi chahti

to do char kilo ka wazan utha ker perho

Yehi to asal wajha hai ajkal ki nayi nasl apne apko bht hi aalaaa o arfaa samjhti hai
Koi baat samjhne ki salahiyat hi nahi aur apne aapko aaala taleemyafta kahte hain..Laholewalaaaaaaa

 

[*khushi*]

acha ok..

lolz dont b sad

 

[Atif-adi]

lolz dont b sad

sad nai hua g bas dukhi hogaya

 

[Atif-adi]

Ye nawaqif logon seisiliye mei guftagu karna nahi chahti

Yehi to asal wajha hai ajkal ki nayi nasl apne apko bht hi aalaaa o arfaa samjhti hai
Koi baat samjhne ki salahiyat hi nahi aur apne aapko aaala taleemyafta kahte hain..Laholewalaaaaaaa

me ap ko sadak par kerwa khala g?{}{4rt5

 

[~Bahaar~]

me ap ko sadak par kerwa khala g?{}{4rt5

Ji nai koi zarurat nahi hai....
Hatooooo paray
Mujhme abhi b itti taqat hai k Olympics me part le sakun

 

[Atif-adi]

Ji nai koi zarurat nahi hai....
Hatooooo paray
Mujhme abhi b itti taqat hai k Olympics me part le sakun

kahi ap wo to nai jinhu ne mere uncle per apna jadu chalaya hai?
ab to wo tnakli dant lagwana chahte hain ap ko dekh ker or to or balo me kala kola bhi

 

[~Bahaar~]

kahi ap wo to nai jinhu ne mere uncle per apna jadu chalaya hai?
ab to wo tnakli dant lagwana chahte hain ap ko dekh ker or to or balo me kala kola bhi

Bbua ap to bare nalayek ho...Ek umarraseeda pardadar khatoon par ilzaam lagate hue zara b khayal nahi aya{}{4rt5 ...Bare hi munh phat ho..huhhh

 

[Atif-adi]

Bbua ap to bare nalayek ho...Ek umarraseeda pardadar khatoon par ilzaam lagate hue zara b khayal nahi aya{}{4rt5 ...Bare hi munh phat ho..huhhh

khala g naraz to na ho werna khaloo meri gher me entry badn ekrwadenge

ek bat bata khala u, u deewaro per shair kyu likhto ho?
kya silsila hai ye?

 

[~Bahaar~]

khala g naraz to na ho werna khaloo meri gher me entry badn ekrwadenge

ek bat bata khala u, u deewaro per shair kyu likhto ho?
kya silsila hai ye?

lolzzzzz....
Ye bht purani dastan hai betaaa...sunkar kya karoge?
Yad e maazi azaab hai Ya rabb...

 

[Atif-adi]

ye wali bhi lines bari thi mene basheer naiii ki gali ki deewar per u ne hi likhi thi na ye?

 

[~Bahaar~]

ye wali bhi lines bari thi mene basheer naiii ki gali ki deewar per u ne hi likhi thi na ye?

Abb mera zaukh itna bhi bura nahi

 

[Atif-adi]

u sarkari school ki deewaro per ja k kyu likhti ho paro ge likhoge to hogey kharab

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalamo alaikum bohot bohot hi zabardast bhai jan

dil chhu gaiy aapki shayari masha'ALLAH lajawab . . .

 

[*khushi*]

sad nai hua g bas dukhi hogaya

 

[Atif-adi]

kya hua

 

[$HADOW]

Beautiful Adi..........