MY first poetry for this site

Discussion in 'Ghazal' started by Saiyyaah, Jan 12, 2008.

  1. Saiyyaah

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    Guys I am a poet I write my own poetry so everything you guys see here is written by my I started writing poetry when I learn to write I was born with this talent I am very sorry for that not many people are born stupid LOL...


    so here I go::::

    Waqat najaane zamane ko kahan lejaega
    hum to ruk jaainge lakin waqat chalta jayega

    koun chalta hai sada sung karwane waqat ke
    har musafir thak ke koi rah pe ruk jayega

    zindagi wo khawab hai tootega jab uth jaainge
    mout ki aaghosh main jab har bashar so jayega

    kia mohabat kia khushi kia dosti kia dushmani
    waqat ka sab khail hai aur sab khatam ho jayega

    na koi insaa_n raha tha na rehega umer bhar
    azal se bas waqat hai aur bas waqat hi reh jaayega

    sochta hoon mai janaza dekh ker jaate hue
    ik kafan he hai mera jo saath mere jaayega
     
  2. mohtarum

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    Achi he. very good
     
  3. Mohtarmaa

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    I must say u r a real Poet.Vey nice {}{43r5
    Keep it up...........
     
  4. Saiyyaah

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    Zindagi ke haalat hain mere dost everything that happens to us which includes all this end...
     
  5. sweet_syndrella

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    bohat khoob
     
  6. Dark

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    ache ha per itne be nahe
    mara sa ache to koi be nahe ha lolz

    i am joinkg . nice guzal
     
  7. Ugy

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    Bohat khoob jee .
     
  8. nrbhayo

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    wah....
     
  9. The_Quiet

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    reallly touching
     

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