moja haket me tum sa koi lafez kehan tha

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  1. Dark

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    moja haket me tum sa koi lafez kehan tha
    mager me scoohta ho ios ka nageem kia ho ga
    bhoot sa dil tote ha is donya me
    mager me scooh ta ho ab hemra kai ho ga​

     
  2. Precious

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    Mujhay haqeequt main tum say koi lufz kahna tha
    Magar main sochta hoon uska Unjaam kia ho ga
    Bohat say dil tootay hain is dunia main
    Magar main sochta hoon ub hamara kia ho ga.


    Sahi samjhi na.

    Good work.
     
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    Emo buchchay aap apni wali delete kar kay yay hum nain jo sahi kar kay likh dia hai yay laga lain to parhnay main samjh aay gi aur maza bhi.
     
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    bohaat hee zabardast

    nice and lovely sharing

    keep it up and thankx

    for sharing
     
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    thanx..
     
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    Thxz 4 sharing{(junmp)}
     
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    {Nice post Tm}
     
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    good{(oh0(}
     
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    Bahut khoob......
    Aaj tak qayam hai uske laut aane ki umeed
    Aaj tak thairi hai zindagi apni jagah
    laakh yeh chaha k usko bhool jaaun faraz
    hausle apni jagah,bebasi apni jagah
     
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    ha thxxxxxxxx
     
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    Nyc SharinG bro..
     
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    Thanx
     
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    nice sharing............
     
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    thanx
     
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    nice post
     
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    میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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    boht khoob likha ap ne..
    lekin plz ap sahi tarha likha kia kren...smjhana mushkil ho jata hai alfaz ko..
    apki shayri boht umdah hai
     

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