I Cry And No 1 ListenS

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  1. Dark

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    when i smile
    i want to cry
    when i laugh
    i want to die
    so i close my eyes
    and await my death
    pray, and say good bye
    because in this mess
    no one will care
    no one pays attention
    but they will see
    the girl they never mentioned
    now that im gone
    they will care
    but for how long
    eventually the sadness goes away
    and life goes on
    so as i sit and think
    i place my arm over the sink
    with this razor i end my life
    all on that horrible night
    youll never understand
    this girl you thought you knew
    it turnned out she loved you
    but you didnt pay attention
    to this girl no one mentioned
    now shes gone and you dont know what to do
    it turnnend out you loved her to
    with a picture of her and a locked dooor
    they found you dead upon the floor

     
  2. Angel

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    beautiful poetry......
     
  3. baloch

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    The ending is rather terrific. Amazing Poetry.

    "There are as many nights as days, and the one is just as long as the other in the year's course. Even a happy life cannot be without a measure of darkness, and the word 'happy' would lose its meaning if it were not balanced by sadness."
    by Carl Gustav Jung
     
  4. grul.bball

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    thats a nice quot
    i think this poerty effect wajdan a lot cuz he's really into emo
     
  5. anmol

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    a beautifull poem
    vr nice
     
  6. Waqar Hussain

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    M@In ALbela M@I M@sTana
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    {(goodpost)}{(goodpost)}{(goodpost)}
     
  7. nrbhayo

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    nice..
     

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