Gaun Ki Kahani Bahen Ki Zubani

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  1. *Muslim*

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    Assalam Alaikum
    Gaun Ki Kahani Bahen Ki Zubani
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    main bohot pehle jab chota tha tab ek baar gaun gaya tha lekin meri bahen ka to aksar gaun jana hota hai, main to chuttian yahin shahar me guzarta hun ya phir kahin ghumne dusre shahar chala jata hun, jab ham dono ki wapsi wapas apne ghar hoti hai to ham dono ek dusre ko safar ke halaat tajrubaat sunate hain aur kya seekha kya dekha sab share karte hain, jab bhi bahen gaun se wapis hoti hai to wahan ki bohot saari khubian wahan ki khush haali wahan ke manazir wahan ke logon ka bholapan saadgi ke bare me bayan karti hai to dil karta hai ek baar zaroor gaun phir se ho aaun lekin jaise hi chutti milti hai kuch na kuch dusra programe ban jaata hai aur main gaun nahi jaa pata, main ne bahen ko aate hi ye nazm sunai
    ay gaon se aany waly bata
    ay gaon se aany waly bata

    kia haal hi mery gaon ka
    pipal ki thandi chhaon ka
    sharmili shokh nighahon ka,
    un naz bhari adaon ka,

    ay gaon se aay waly bata ,,,ay gaon se aany waly bata

    ajkal humary gaon main kiasa swera hota hi,
    kia ab bhi unky aangan main pholon ka basera hota hi,,
    panchi geet sunaty hain jab door andhera hota hi,
    unky dil main kia ab bhi meri yaad ka dera hota hi,,,

    ay gaon se aay waly bata ,,,ay gaon se aany waly bata

    kia ab gaon ki galion main bachy shor machaaty hain,,
    pyari pyari baton se sab ka dil behlaaty hain,,,
    guddy our guddi ki shaadi bhi karwaaty hain,,
    our chhuti k din kheton main maan baap ka haath bataaty hain,,

    ay gaon se aay waly bata ,,,ay gaon se aany waly bata

    kia ab bhi humaary khaiton k samaan syhaany hoty hain ,,,,
    kia ab bhi jwaanon k lab par waisy traany hoty hain,,,,
    hum khel jo khela karty thy wahi khel puraany hoty hain,,,,

    ay gaon se aay waly bata ,,,ay gaon se aany waly bata

    kia ab bhi gaon ki naarian paani bharny jaati hain,,,
    apny sundar pairon ki payel bhi chhankaati hain,,,
    sab sakhiaan ik dooji ko dil haal sunaati hain,,,,,
    our apny nazak saron par teen chaar ghary uthaati hain,,,

    ay gaon se aay waly bata ,,,ay gaon se aany waly bata

    kuch to mujhko haal suna meri mehbooba matwaali ka,,,:D
    jheel si jiski aankhain thin,naagan zulfon wali ka,,,
    phool sa jiska chehra tha,masoom si bholi bhali ka,,,
    jo Fazal k ishq main pagal thi us pagal dilwali ka,,,
    kia woh ab bhi takti hi meri raah,,,,,,,,,? :p

    ay gaon se aay waly bata ,,,ay gaon se aany waly bata
    to us ne tasweer nikali apni purse se, is baar usne kuch tasweeren bhi apne saath layi jo usne wahan li thi aur phir ek tasweer par usne gaun ka manzar kheencha to main bhi dekhta hi reh gaya aur sun kar dil shadeed khwahishmand hua ke is baar to jana hi jana hai

    manzar kitna pyara tha, bahen tasweer dikha kar kehti hai ke bhai dekho jab main yahan gayi to ye manzar kitna pyara laga mujhe safed badal jheel ke kinare chote chote ghar aur yahan ki thandi hawa se ek sakoon milta hai bhaai aur yahan par khudrati zarayon se hi hawa milti hai bade bade pedh hain, jheel kinaron se kitni thandi khudrati hawa aati hai, ye kachi sadken dekh rahe ho in se mitti ki khushbu mehsoos kar sakte hain, choti choti nadian, talaab aur unme khelte parinde, ye safed batkhen dekho kitni pyari hain ye dekho rakham rakham ke phool paude, chirhion ki awaazen oh kitna hi pyara manzar hota hai bhai aur ye sab yahan shahar me kahan dekhne ko milta hai kahan itna sukoon hai yahan, aur gaun mein larkian kuwen se peene ka pani khud jaa ke laati hain aur shahar ki tarah larkion ko bahar dekh kar koi cher char bhi nahi karta balke sab apne apne kamon me masroof rehte hain, bohot hi khush aqlaaq loog hote hain gaun wale, ye jo pani ka matka leke kuwen ke qareeb me hai ye meri saheli ban gayi hai aur wo jo piche chote se pyare se pul se aa rahi hain ye uske paros ki larkian hain wo bhi bohot achi hain, inka libaas bhi kitna pyara hai na bhaai aur bhai ap gaun ki saaf safai bhi dekho aur ye ghar dekho ye jhopdian kitni pyari hain, mitti aur ghaans se inko banaya gaya hai isme garmi ke mausam me bhi thandak hoti hai aur phir iski sajawat bhi dekho, kuch logon ne to chat rang birangi banayi hai kawelion se sajaai hai,

    main bas ye tasweer dekhta raha aur bahen ki baten sunta raha aise lag raha tha main khud wahan maujood hun aur is manzar ko khud wahan ho kar dekh raha hun aur jo kuch bahen ne bataya wo mehsoos kar raha hun, itne me ammi ne awaaz di ke khana laga hai kha lo phir ham dono wahan se uthe aur main bahen se kehne laga is baar jo chuttian hongi main bhi tere sath chalunga gaun
    doston ye rahi choti si koshish is manzar par meri manzar kashi :p
    hope ke ap sab ko pasand ayegi in sha Allah
     
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    Wa'alaikumussalaam Muslim bro

    Masha'ALLAH bohot hi achhi koshish ki hai aap ne
    kahaani ko bare achhe tarah se diye gaye manzar per
    laaye ho aap maza aa gaya parh kar

    best of luck for the contest .
     
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    nice kahani sun k muje meri situation yaad aagayi mai bhi bhai ka dimag aise hi khati hon lol
    but aap next time gaon zaror jana :p
    btw best of luck
     
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    kahin is kahani me jo bahen hy wo ap hi tu ny hu na :p
     
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    hahaha waise lag tou yahi raha hai
     
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    pehle se pata huta to ye bhi my zikar kar deta ke meri bahen ko apple phenk ke marne ki adat bhi hy :p
     
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    hmmmmm niceee storyyy wese gaon main yeh sab suchi muchi b hota hai ya sab kehne or sunne ki hi baten hain?
     
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    shukriya bhaai
    abhi my b par raha hun to muje bhi maza aa raha hai :p
     
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    hawww dats not fair woh tou secret hai kisi ko batane wali baat thori :p
     
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    abi jab nxt time ny jaunga na bhai tab apku bataunga[DOUBLEPOST=1347130832][/DOUBLEPOST]
    hehe thik hy
    logon wu bas my ne mazak kia tha meri bahen aisi ny hy :p
     
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    next time jaoge hi nhi to bataoge kya?
    oo hello main fahad hon bhai faith kyun samjh rhe ho
     
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    haha better :p[DOUBLEPOST=1347130992][/DOUBLEPOST]
    koi faith samaj bhi nhi rha aapko /:)
     
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    bhai apki post pe hi tu apku comment kia
    aur is bar my kiu ny jaunga?
     
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    Walaikum Salam
    Zabardastttttttttttttttt
    bahut khobsorati se gaun k sab rang bayan ki hain....
    yeh kahani parh kar sach mei mujhe laga k mein bhi wohi (image) mei hon.... aww imaginary world;;)
    anyways....Good luck!
     
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    shukria
    abi muje bhuk lagi hy my chala
     
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    yar apne kaha next time ap ny jaoge na tab muje btao ge
    to jab jaoge hi nhi to btao ge kaise?
     
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    Hahha achha .
     
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    yr tum abi to online hoi ho itni jaldi itni bari story read b krli?
    samjh gaya beta tum b mera wala tarika hi use krti ho
    bs start ki ek line parhi or direct end pr aker comments kr dye
     

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