Dupatta tumhara hoo

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  1. Prince-Farry

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    I personally wrote this sher around 3 Years ago. I think this is the best sher i have ever written. here it is.. ankhein khuli ho tu chehra tumhara hoo ankhein band ho tu sapna tumhara hoo Aee mahi hame tu maut bhi manzoor agar kafan ki jagah.. DUPATTA TUMHARA HO
     
  2. anmol

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    u sure u wrote it read it somwhere...
    itz nice
     
  3. Prince-Farry

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    yeah dun worry...thnkz...{(popcorn)}
     
  4. Waqar Hussain

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    good work waqas bhai
     
  5. Precious

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    Waqai bohat zabardast hai per nasr ki tarha kioon likh dia Shairi ki tarha likhain to ziada achcha lagay ga.
     
  6. Prince-Farry

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    shukriya P...{(popcorn)}
     
  7. محمد الیاس

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    khayal accha hey magar vazn kamzor hey.
     
  8. *shehzadi*

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    =d>=d>=d>=d>
     
  9. Sabah

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    really good one pf...
     
  10. ~Bahaar~

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    hmmm....nice one..
     
  11. saviou

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    bohot khoob mohtaram :)

    par aise dupatte kya kare jo kafan banjaye ?
     
  12. Tooba Alvi

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    nice poetry, i like it
     
  13. Qawareer

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    میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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    han ma ne b ye pehle kahen suna hai......
    farry ap ne likha hai????
     
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    میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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    han saviou bro sochne wali bat hai...
     
  15. munazza

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    really nice. ireally like this sharing
     

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