u bhi bohat acha likhti hoWalaikum As Salam
Shabash
Jeeti raho
phalo phoolo
wawooooooo...yaar yahan sab hi poets hain mere siwa..
baht hi khubsurat sara..keep it up sisoo...
Thanx Chiragh bahai aik or martabaWa'alaikum assalam mein to bata hi chuka hoon
ke poetry zabardast hai
ab yeh bata deta hoon ke mujhe laga shayad aap eik dost ko dedicate karogi
per aap ne saare TM family ko dedicate ki bohot hi achha laga
keep writing and keep sharing with us
Thanx KuriAwesomeeeee!!!!!!!!!! bhat achi hy n keep it up!!
Thanx Bp :xGR888888888888888888888888 Yaar bht acha likha ha u ny
keep it up
Asslam O Alykum ya poetry mai ny khud first time likhi hy
bus asi mind mai ayi to likh di or fir Chiragh bahai sy is ki correction bhi karwi
Umeed hy ap sub ko pasand ay gi
Aye dost tu rahe khush hai humari dua
na ho tu mayus kabhi hai humari dua
teri dosti hai humare liye kitni ehem
naam kya dein ise ye sochte rahe hum
har apne se kare aage dosti ka rishta
dost wo ke nibhaye dosti teri tarah
kab shuru huwi yeh bhi yaad nahin
kab pakki huwi iska bhi pata na chala
dar lagta hai us ghum ke tufaan se
jab hum chale jaayengein is jahan se
dunya ko sub faani kehte hain
per hum to yehi jaante hain
aur yehi du'a din raat
hum apne RAB se maangte hain
yeh dunya aur hum rahen na rahen
per is dosti ki salamati maangte hain
aur KHUDA ki ata ka bhi jawab nahin dost
jahan bhi bulaoge humein paoge waheen dost
har dam saath rakhengein tumhare duaen apni
kis ne kaha ke tum bhi kabhi tanha reh paoge
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