chalo hum ko be betlo

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    chalo hum ko be betlo
    ka ankhei kio tarptei ha
    ya dil kio machlta ha
    ya aknho sa samder jo
    her pel kio neklta ha
    kia koei roog ha tum ko
    ya koei yaad aya ha
    chalo hum ko be betlo
    ka ankhei kio tarptei ha

     
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    aha nice bro
    keep writing like thiz
    {(goodpost)}
     
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    bohaat khoob emo bhai
     
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    bhot acha likha hai bhai... {(goodpost)}
     
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    Chalo humko bhi batlao
    Kay ankhain kioon tar'apti hain
    Yay dil kioon machalta hai
    Yay Ankhon say samandar jo (agar aap bura na manain to yahan par jo ki zaroorat naheen hai)
    Her pul kioon nikalta hai
    Kia koi roag hai tumko
    Ya koi yaad aya hai
    Chalo humko bhi butlao
    Kay ankhain kioon tar'apti hain.



    Bohat hi achcha hai.
     
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    u marei galtei mut neklo ok {}{r54 maei na jo likha theeq ha {(phy)}
     
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    oooooooohhhh...emo bhai udass mat ho......tumne jaisa likha hai bhot acha likha hai....{(gimmefive)}
     
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    bohaat hee zabardast

    nice and lovely sharing

    keep it up and thankx

    for sharing
     
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    thanx..
     
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    Thxz 4 sharing{(junmp)}
     
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    {(gjob)} bohat khoob likha hai
     
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    {(gjob)}
     
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    very nice try tanha. gud i liked i{(oh0(}t
     
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    bahut khoob.....

    dukh fasana nahi k tujh se kahen
    dil bhi mana nahi k tujh se kahen
    aaj tak apni bekali ka sabab
    khud bhi jana nahi k tujh se kahen
     
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    thx payal
     
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    NyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyCcc sharinG bro..
     
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    Thanx
     
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    nice sharing............
     
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