Boht chaha hy main ny

[saviou]

masha Allah
bohot achi koshish

 

[Javeriya90]

kiya baat hy jee...

 

[Lightman]

yeh main ny hi Likhi thi na.....

 

[Nelly]

hain, tum ne nai likhi thi?

 

[Qawareer]

kis ne likhi hai phir?????

 

[Lightman]

kis ne likhi hai phir?????

Lightman Ny...

 

[Qawareer]

wah boht khoob. LM
BOHT HI ACHA LIKHA..
KHAYALAT B ACHE HAIN OR ALFAZ KA CHUNAO B BOHT ACHE TARIKE SE KIA GYA HAI..
lekin LM is ghazal ka pehla shair hum qafiya nhi..(koi bat nhi ma ne b apni pehli ghazal me yon hi kia tha)lekin urdu shayri me ghazal ka pehla shair hum kafiya hona chaheye..
BERHAL BOHT HI KHOOB,umdah..YON HI LIKHTE RHEN OR SHARE KRTE RHE...

 

[yoursks]

bohat umdaah kavish hai...

well done and keep writing...

 

[Atif-adi]

nice LM

 

[diya ali]

Uffffff great

 

[Lightman]

Fnxx guyz....

 

[-Mahi-]

Boht chaha hy main nay tumhe chah say,
Magr is chah ko koi chahny nahi deta.​

main poet to nhi lakin kabi kabi apny ultay seadhy khayalt ko likh leta hun..i hope k ap meri galtio ko ignore kar dain gay.​

Sure buddy i ignored

 

[Lightman]

Sure buddy i ignored

thnxx but agr meri galtioun ko point out krien gy to aur b khushi hogi mujhe...

 

[-Mahi-]

thnxx but agr meri galtioun ko point out krien gy to aur b khushi hogi mujhe...

haan buddy gal tu sahi aki u na
mager dear galti tu koi poet hi nikal sakta hain main nahi nikal sakti mujse kaha ati hain poetry