han g han g..hum kb apki in naayab or munfarid salahiton se inkari hain..
haan na itni achi shayri hay hmari
~bazm-e-sukhan Anaaya Ali K Sath~ *saviou*
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muje kese lgta..main koi shayer hon bhala..
kahin apko to sadma nahi laga na
koi achi muchi wala shayer hota to hume bhaga deta yahan se
muje kese lgta..main koi shayer hon bhala..
koi achi muchi wala shayer hota to hume bhaga deta yahan se
haha array behna ap to bohot acha likhte ho
balke apko to zaroor likhte rehna chahiye
abhi shuruat kardo aur hamare upar hi kuch likhne pehle
ye sawal b ap k nigah-e-karm ka intazar kring..shairy me mazah ka rang ho to or b maza aata hai..
koi maze ka funny sa shair sunaye
k kb ap ki is pe nazr pare or ap jawab den
ye sawal b ap k nigah-e-karm ka intazar kring..
k kb ap ki is pe nazr pare or ap jawab den
mohtarma ye to hame kehna chahiye apke is sawal ka jo hamne jawab de diya hai wo apke nazre karam ka muntazir hai
thora is par nazar dalen post no 82
http://www.tafrehmela.com/shayari-games/164204-bazm-e-sukhan-anaaya-ali-k-sath-6.html
ohhh..
mohtarma ye to hame kehna chahiye apke is sawal ka jo hamne jawab de diya hai wo apke nazre karam ka muntazir hai
thora is par nazar dalen post no 82
http://www.tafrehmela.com/shayari-games/164204-bazm-e-sukhan-anaaya-ali-k-sath-6.html
koi nhi esa b hota hai banda bashar hon main b..
haha array behna ap to bohot acha likhte ho
balke apko to zaroor likhte rehna chahiye
abhi shuruat kardo aur hamare upar hi kuch likhne pehle
(Allah na kre yahan koi asli shayer aaye warna humari khair nhi)humare is naqis aqal me kuch aaya to foran manzar-eaam par layen ge..
hahahhaha..
kbi na kbi to annu b smjhe jaye gi k...
hoor aapa k pop corn chura k kuch nhi milta..
haan haan hota hai hota hai koi gal nahiohhh..
koi nhi esa b hota hai banda bashar hon main b..
humare is naqis aqal me kuch aaya to foran manzar-eaam par layen ge..
matlab apko abhi shak hai hamari shayari par
hame intezar rahega un lamhaat ka jab ye manzar e aam par ayenge
hahahhaha..
kbi na kbi to annu b smjhe jaye gi k...
hoor aapa k pop corn chura k kuch nhi milta..
waah waah kya baat hai
ab hoor didi ko samajh lena hi chahiye ke
hame aise tung karne se unhe kuch nahi milta
ahaaaaaan wah wah MASHAALLAH
perfect answer
main kia roshni daalun bhaya torch hi aap en pakar liya
aap is pariksha may pass huey
chlain abhi agla sawal
apni zaat k baarey may kioi shaer ya koi ghzal btayain
koi aisa shaer jo aapki zaat ko best describe kar sakey aap k khayal may?
haha bohot shukriya hame imtehan me pass karne k liye
toch to hamne leli lekin uski battery apke paas reh gayi hai
aur apne ye jo sawal kiya hai bohot acha laga hame kyun aise ek do ashar aur ek ghazal bhi hamne kaafi arse pehle padhe the usko hifz to kiye the lekin abhi hamare paas nahi ye interview khatam hone tak milen to zaroor apse share karenge inshaAllah
nhi apki shairy pe nhi..jo ap ne mere liye kaha us ne..
matlab apko abhi shak hai hamari shayari par
hame intezar rahega un lamhaat ka jab ye manzar e aam par ayenge
chelan.intazar farmayen
nhi apki shairy pe nhi..jo ap ne mere liye kaha us ne..
chelan.intazar farmayen
jee mohtarma zaroor intezar rahega
acha..mashAllah..
ap ne jo apni walda muhartma k liye likha us me se agr ap k pas kuch hai to share kren..
acha ye bataen ki apki rafiq-e-hayaat ki dil chaspi hai shairy me..un k liye ap ne kuch likha?
hmm abhi to nahi hai annu
asal me kya hai hamne kitabi shakal me sab jama nahi kiye the balke kuch auraag me likh dete the phir usko biltarteeb pc me save kardete jab ham chutti gaye to sara data apne sath USB me lekar gaye the aur india me ek caffe me usko bhul gaye aur usme kayi ashar aur bohot si nazm aur ghazlen jo hamne shuru to kiye the mukammal nahi huyi thi wo sab gum gayee
khair aage agar kuch likhenge balke zaroor likhne ki koshish karenge aur apse share bhi karenge inshaAllah
aur rahi hamare rafiq e hayaat ki baat jab pehli baar hamne unki tasveer dekhe to uspar ek ghazal likhe the aur yahan share bhi kiye hain aur apne bhi padha hai usko
http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-poet/140007-phir-dil-mein-ek-hasrath-si-hone-lagi.html
aur baki hamari shadi k baad bhi hamne kuch likha hai jaise hi mukammal ho sochenge share karen ya na karen
waah waah kya baat hai
ab hoor didi ko samajh lena hi chahiye ke
hame aise tung karne se unhe kuch nahi milta
hahahhaha..
kbi na kbi to annu b smjhe jaye gi k...
hoor aapa k pop corn chura k kuch nhi milta..
hahahaha
aur aap dono kab samajhain gaye
k meri ghair mojoodgi may akele akele enjoy karne se bhi kuch nhi milta {(nea)}
ok g zaroor INSHAALLAH
haha bohot shukriya hame imtehan me pass karne k liye
toch to hamne leli lekin uski battery apke paas reh gayi hai
aur apne ye jo sawal kiya hai bohot acha laga hame kyun aise ek do ashar aur ek ghazal bhi hamne kaafi arse pehle padhe the usko hifz to kiye the lekin abhi hamare paas nahi ye interview khatam hone tak milen to zaroor apse share karenge inshaAllah
agla sawal
aisa kaha jaata hay balkey muje bhi lagta hay k shayer logon ko baat karne may itni maharat hoti hay k wo doosre logon ko aasani se bewaqoof bna laite hain
aur kuch shayer to shayri jaise azeem hunar ko kisi azeem maqsad may istamal karne ki bjaaye issi kaam k liye istamal kartey hain
aapka is baare may kia khayal hay?
haan na itni achi shayri hay hmari
haan kisi ko koi shak o shubha nahi hai apki shayari par
lekin kahan gayab ho aap