aapka Manzar ,aapki kahani!! 3 march-2012 to 10-march 2012

[Toobi]

walikum asalam...

wah kia bat hay ap dono ko...bht he behtareen kawish hay sacche...


waqe 2 the point stry likke hay...

ap dono ko dek kar mera b liknay ka mun karaha hay.......

 

[saviou]

walikum asalam...

wah kia bat hay ap dono ko...bht he behtareen kawish hay sacche...


waqe 2 the point stry likke hay...

ap dono ko dek kar mera b liknay ka mun karaha hay.......

shukran behna
to phir der kis baat ki qalam uthayen aur likhna shuru karen

 

[whiteros]

wah wa ary ap to achhe khasy writer nikly,,great

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

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Wa'alaikum assalam

bohot hi achha likha hai bhai jan asal zndagi ke qareeb
aur khoobsurat andaaz mein

gud luck

 

[saviou]

aur kitni baar ek hi post doh raoge janab

 

[maher asad]

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waaaahhh boooooht khooiob maher g...:*yai aap nay khud bnai hai..????i salute you...{(hat)}

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[Hoorain]

aap bhi bnayain koi story issi image pe maher bro

 

[mashraki.larka]

thanks

thanks Adi

beautifuly written bro

 

[mashraki.larka]

waaaahhh boooooht khooiob maher g...:*yai aap nay khud bnai hai..????i salute you...{(hat)}

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G haan rat 2:30 bajy tak yehi karvai ho rahi thi ,

thank you asad

 

[mashraki.larka]

Wa'alaikum assalam

bohot hi achha likha hai bhai jan asal zndagi ke qareeb
aur khoobsurat andaaz mein

gud luck

thank you Saif
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[mashraki.larka]

wah wa ary ap to achhe khasy writer nikly,,great

thanks WR

 

[mashraki.larka]

walikum asalam...

wah kia bat hay ap dono ko...bht he behtareen kawish hay sacche...


waqe 2 the point stry likke hay...

ap dono ko dek kar mera b liknay ka mun karaha hay.......

........... thanks khanm


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[mashraki.larka]

thanks hooray

Bohat zabardast MASHAALLAH

waqe hi parhte hue Dehat ka saara manzar poori kahani mind may chal rhi thi

Very nice

GUD LUCK!

thanks for the vote of confidence hooray ...

sari rat yehi to tarteeb dene mn lag gai ..

 

[mashraki.larka]

hmmmm zabardast ML
bilkul pic k mutabik kahani likhi hai
or lafzoo ka b sahi use kya hai
or kahani ka mahool hai usko b acche se define kya hai

thank you Jabeen

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[maher asad]

G haan rat 2:30 bajy tak yehi karvai ho rahi thi ,

thank you asad

bus g zook to raat k pechlay paher may he ata hai..its ok maher g..

 

[HuriYa]

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WahOoo awesOmeeee..!

Zaberdast likha hay Bhiya..! well aap ki sari stOry Given Image se Match kerti hay. Bohat KhObsurati se brief but detailed view paish kia hay aap nay..!

aur Jahan tak likhnay aur words k istymal ki baat hay wOh Bilkul aak mature writer ki terah hain aur Mujhay bOhat acha laga perh k even dil ker raha tha K is se bhi Lambi stOry hota..!

Beautiful n intersting..!

 

[*Sonu*]

beautifully written Nasir bhaiya & ML bhaiya

best of luck both of ya​

 

[Jiya.]

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ahaan v.nyc written story ML
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[maher asad]

aap bhi bnayain koi story issi image pe maher bro

hmmm bnaao ga thora time lgy ga aapi

 

[Hoorain]

okesh but friday tak is image pe yahan share karni hay story,,,us k baad to image change kar dungi main