aapka Manzar ,aapki kahani!! 3 march-2012 to 10-march 2012
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Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb
abhi tak kisi ne kuch share nahi kiya
chalen is susti ko door karne ke liye ek sust ki kahani hi suna dete hain
waise kahania to ham likhte nahi lekin hoor didi likhna sikha diye akhir
umeed karte hain ap sab ko pasand aaye ye tooti phooti kahani
Main Sust Tha
roz ki tarah aaj bhi suraj mujh se pehle tulu ho gaya jab bahar aaya to manzar bhi roz ki tarah hi khush gawar tha thandi dhoop thi chirion ki gungunahat bhi, sab apne kaam me khushi khushi lage hue the dada ji bailon ko pani pila rahe the baba kunwe se pani nikal rahe the maa chote padu ke liye ghans la rahi thi jo ghar ka naya rukn hai aur choti bhi ussi ke liye bartan me kuch bana rahi thi, chotu to padu se chimta hua khush tha usse sehla raha tha aur baki janwar bhi roz ki tarah unke apne mashgale me the, raha main ek jo roz ki tarah sust aur nikamma thaaur main sochne laga jab kal ko koi ye manzar dekhe to in sab ke sath unhe main bhi kaam karta hua nazar aana chahiye
ab mujhe kal ki subah ka intezar hai aur ab main keh sakta hun ke main sust tha lekin ab nahi hun
naish story saviou ...mere mind mn bi kch aesa hi khaka tha ....
ab kch or sochta hn ....
acha ruko me zara apna feather wala pen le aonzahir hay adi bhai aap sab ne hi likhna hay phir hi competition hoga maze ka
ap ko to pata hai na humari behen sahiba k jese hi us kalam ko hum chu lete hain to humare ander ek namwar adeeb jag jata hai or humm likhte jate hain likhte jate hain({kopping)}hahaha yup
waise meko aapka wo pen bohat pasand hay kabhi kabhi hi sahi pakarte to ho aap
sachi may kitni baar hi usse churane ki koshish ki maine
bande ki shukriya or nawazish kobool hoohooo g g adeeb sahab ab to aap ne hmari expectation ko aur barha diya
abhi aapki story parh k hi reply karain gaye
GUD LUCK
InshAllah
hahaha Affwaan Affwaaaaaaaan Mohtaram
ek kaam mat karo title ko thora bhi mat badalo...jaise likha hain rahne do.....
Tha zyada acha lag raha hai
shukran bro
mere mind mn bi kch aesa hi khaka tha ....
shukar hai hamne pehle post kardiya warna aap jo ab keh rahe hain wo hame kehna parhta
befikar rhain
bachke rehna
hahaha sahi kaha daikha na credit goes to me agar main aapko bara baar na kehti to aap ne ab tak nhi likhni thi aur phir pachtate rehna tha
shukran bro
shukar hai hamne pehle post kardiya warna aap jo ab keh rahe hain wo hame kehna parhta
jee bilkul
befikar rhain
hahaha sahi kaha daikha na credit goes to me agar main aapko bara baar na kehti to aap ne ab tak nhi likhni thi aur phir pachtate rehna tha
aap ne bade hone ka farz nibhaya
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