Aam logon may bohat dair bithaya gya main!

[Hoorain]

itna aasna nhi masnad pe bithaya gya main
shehr-e-tohmat teri galion may phiraya gya main

ye to ab ishq may jee lagne lga hay kuch kuch
is taraf pehle pehal ghair k laya gya main

khauf itna tha k deewar pakar kar nikla
is se milne k liye soorat e saya gya main

tujh se kuch kehne ki himmat hi nhi thi warna
ik muddat tak teri dehleez tak aaya gya main

khalwat-e-khaas may bulwane se pehle tabish
am logon may bohat dair bithaya gya main!​

 

[Wasif Safi]

wah wah zabardast hoor
Maqta bohot acha hai

 

[Hoorain]

thank u

 

[whiteros]

ye to ab ishq may jee lagne lga hay kuch kuch
is taraf pehle pehal ghair k laya gya main
khalwat-e-khaas may bulwane se pehle tabish
am logon may bohat dair bithaya gya main!

UDAS NA HO K PHIR IZAT SE BULAYA GYA HAI TU

 

[Hoorain]

ahaaan nice reply whitros,,,tabish uncle tak pohanch jata to acha rehta

 

[whiteros]

hahaha chalo dear tum tak to ponhcha na

 

[Hoorain]

g g

 

[Babar-Azam]

hmmmmmm

 

[whiteros]

g g

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Ahaan great sharing
i liked the ghazal
meri bhi eik choti si koshish

Is dunya mein to sach keh kar hi
saza e mulzim e kamil tak laya gaya mein

na kabhi dagh aane diya daman per iske
phir kyun ishq me itna tarpaya gaya mein

aisa to kuch na tha ke mera raha koi nahin
magar hadd e zarurat tak hi apnaya gaya mein

kiya mujh per yaqeen to mene hi sirf
baaqi har eik se har baar azmaya gaya mein

aur baad e mout hi zamaana samajh paya mujhe
mere ghazalon ke sabab parhaya gaya mein

***S_ChiragH***​

 

[Hoorain]

Ahaan great sharing
i liked the ghazal
meri bhi eik choti si koshish

Is dunya mein to sach keh kar hi
saza e mulzim e kamil tak laya gaya mein

na kabhi dagh aane diya daman per iske
phir kyun ishq me itna tarpaya gaya mein

aisa to kuch na tha ke mera raha koi nahin
magar hadd e zarurat tak hi apnaya gaya mein

kiya mujh per yaqeen to mene hi sirf
baaqi har eik se har baar azmaya gaya mein

aur baad e mout hi zamaana samajh paya mujhe
mere ghazalon ke sabab parhaya gaya mein

***S_ChiragH***​

wah wahh wahhh bohat khoob

kiya mujh per yaqeen to mene hi sirf
baaqi har eik se har baar azmaya gaya mein​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

wah wahh wahhh bohat khoob

kiya mujh per yaqeen to mene hi sirf
baaqi har eik se har baar azmaya gaya mein​

Shukria shukria

 

[masoomdon]

Zabardast Poetry

 

[Hoorain]

thanx!

 

[Asma Shah]

Nice one...............

 

[Hoorain]

thanx...

 

[*Muskaan*]

Wah kia baat hay.......

 

[Hoorain]

shukran....