My Very Own First Ghazal..<3,,,(zaraa Zaraa)

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Shizu said:

Assalamulaikum...
Here m sharing my very own first Ghazal..
Padh kar bataaen kaisi lagi???:p

Mere chaara gar mere humnawa
Koi shaam mujhse bhi mil zaraa
Tu sabhi k dard ko baant kar
Mere zakhm marham se bhar zaraa

Meri khaam thi ye khayali bhi
Meri zaat tujhse hi hai judi
Mere khwaab hi the faraib me
Tu inhe haqiqi bana zaraa

Tujhe soch kar tujhe jaan kar
Tujhe pooch kar tujhe maan kar
Meri zaat mujhme simat gayi
Main kahin hun gar tou bata zaraa

Mujhe chodna hai tou chod do
Isi dast par isi aan main
Meri reh guzar ki fikar na kar
Ye hayaat ab hai zaraa zaraa

Mere haal se kisi aur ko
Na hi garz hai na hi waasta
Kya tera bhi inme shumaar hai
Jo pataa Chale tou bata zaraa..
{(thx)}{(thx)}{(thx)}
:p


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walaikumusslaam... :-bd gud 1 keep it up :p
 
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Shizu said:
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Assalamulaikum...​
Here m sharing my very own first Ghazal..​
Padh kar bataaen kaisi lagi???:p​
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Mere chaara gar mere humnawa​
Koi shaam mujhse bhi mil zaraa​
Tu sabhi k dard ko baant kar​
Mere zakhm marham se bhar zaraa​
​
Meri khaam thi ye khayali bhi​
Meri zaat tujhse hi hai judi​
Mere khwaab hi the faraib me​
Tu inhe haqiqi bana zaraa​
​
Tujhe soch kar tujhe jaan kar​
Tujhe pooch kar tujhe maan kar​
Meri zaat mujhme simat gayi​
Main kahin hun gar tou bata zaraa​
​
Mujhe chodna hai tou chod do​
Isi dast par isi aan main​
Meri reh guzar ki fikar na kar​
Ye hayaat ab hai zaraa zaraa​
​
Mere haal se kisi aur ko​
Na hi garz hai na hi waasta​
Kya tera bhi inme shumaar hai​
Jo pataa Chale tou bata zaraa..​
{(thx)}{(thx)}{(thx)}​
:p​
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awsmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wah wah :)
 
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Shizu said:

Assalamulaikum...
Here m sharing my very own first Ghazal..
Padh kar bataaen kaisi lagi???:p

Mere chaara gar mere humnawa
Koi shaam mujhse bhi mil zaraa
Tu sabhi k dard ko baant kar
Mere zakhm marham se bhar zaraa

Meri khaam thi ye khayali bhi
Meri zaat tujhse hi hai judi
Mere khwaab hi the faraib me
Tu inhe haqiqi bana zaraa

Tujhe soch kar tujhe jaan kar
Tujhe pooch kar tujhe maan kar
Meri zaat mujhme simat gayi
Main kahin hun gar tou bata zaraa

Mujhe chodna hai tou chod do
Isi dast par isi aan main
Meri reh guzar ki fikar na kar
Ye hayaat ab hai zaraa zaraa

Mere haal se kisi aur ko
Na hi garz hai na hi waasta
Kya tera bhi inme shumaar hai
Jo pataa Chale tou bata zaraa..
{(thx)}{(thx)}{(thx)}
:p


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aap ki Book kab tak aa rahi he market me?????


well... m speechless yeh age aur yeh caliber.. aap agar aisey hi likhti rahen to achy achon ki chutti :)

Alfaaz ka chunaao.. Zehni miyaar ki akkasi karta he.. koi immaturity nahi jhalakti for the 1st try.. thodi bahut nok palak sanwar ke it can easily b calld a master piece.. i m sure..

bahuuuuuuuut khoob... i m impressed :)
 
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Ab to bhool b gayi Likhna :(
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dont worry phir sy yaad a jaega :p meny first tym 9th ya 10th me likha tha u sk baad 3 to 4 years bad likha wo b jab sb ny encourage kiya to wrna me b chor chuki thi =)) ab koshish na b krun to khud e likhny jata hy :p talent ho to chupta nahi hy ;)
 
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P@ssion said:
aap ki Book kab tak aa rahi he market me?????


well... m speechless yeh age aur yeh caliber.. aap agar aisey hi likhti rahen to achy achon ki chutti :)

Alfaaz ka chunaao.. Zehni miyaar ki akkasi karta he.. koi immaturity nahi jhalakti for the 1st try.. thodi bahut nok palak sanwar ke it can easily b calld a master piece.. i m sure..

bahuuuuuuuut khoob... i m impressed :)
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thnkuu X_X
 
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dont worry phir sy yaad a jaega :p meny first tym 9th ya 10th me likha tha u sk baad 3 to 4 years bad likha wo b jab sb ny encourage kiya to wrna me b chor chuki thi =)) ab koshish na b krun to khud e likhny jata hy :p talent ho to chupta nahi hy ;)
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chalo ji..
Will Try InshAllah ;;)
 
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Kit_Kat said:
dont worry phir sy yaad a jaega :p meny first tym 9th ya 10th me likha tha u sk baad 3 to 4 years bad likha wo b jab sb ny encourage kiya to wrna me b chor chuki thi =)) ab koshish na b krun to khud e likhny jata hy :p talent ho to chupta nahi hy ;)
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yeh apney monh miyan mithoo kis khushi me banaa jaa raha he :p
 
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